Answer by Tomiwa Ogunmodede:
I think it's just a little bit flat. Just a tad bit ordinary. But then, I'm not American, so what could I possibly know?!
Here's my take on the logo:
God bless Quora!
Guys! Thanks for the comments and suggestions.
I am taking them into consideration and thus christening the second iteration of my take on the #hillary2016 logo.
The stars and stripes are in full view here.
Criticism, suggestions and comments are appreciated.